A Rainy Day

Jun 3, 2015 21:15
Since it rained after a long interval, I went to my university by foot.

However, my umbrella was in my laboratory, and I only had a folding umbrella.

Therefore, my shoulders and my shoes got bloody soaked.

I felt a bit blue.

When I came home, the rain had ceased.

It was thankful for small mercies.
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  • A Rainy Day
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  • Since it rained after a long interval, I went to my university by foot.
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  • However, my umbrella was in my laboratory, and I only had a folding umbrella.
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  • Therefore, my shoulders and my shoes got bloody soaked.
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  • I felt a bit blue.
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  • When I came home, the rain had ceased.
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  • It was thankful for small mercies.
  • It was thankful for small mercies.
     Did you mean "I was thankful for small mercies?"
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :)
> Did you mean "I was thankful for small mercies?"
Oh, yes. I wanted to say something like that.
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